WikiPOBia talk:Rules and guidelines

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As an admirer of POB's mastery of the English language, I'm suggesting a few changes to grammar:

First sentence should read "The goal of the WikiPOBia is is to create an on-line resource for the works of Patrick O'Brian; if you are reading these pages, you can contribute to them as well."

Under Editing Guidelines, there should be a "." after "revised". There should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "discussion area".

Under Neutral point of view, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "villains".

Under Respect for all contributors, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "accident".

Under Works of Patrick O'Brian, there should be a "." at the end of the second sentence. In the second paragraph, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "other sources".

Under The fillum, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "in the wiki". Alternatively, replace "however" with "but". In the next sentence, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "contrasted".

Replace "Actors careers" with "Actors' careers". After the link to IMDB, there should be a "." rather than a comma.

Thanks

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