WikiPOBia talk:Rules and guidelines
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Revision as of 03:32, 4 June 2007
As an admirer of POB's mastery of the English language, I'm suggesting a few changes to grammar:
First sentence should read "The goal of the WikiPOBia is is to create an on-line resource for the works of Patrick O'Brian; if you are reading these pages, you can contribute to them as well."
Under Editing Guidelines, there should be a "." after "revised". There should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "discussion area".
Under Neutral point of view, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "villains".
Under Respect for all contributors, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "accident".
Under Works of Patrick O'Brian, there should be a "." at the end of the second sentence. In the second paragraph, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "other sources".
Under The fillum, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "in the wiki". Alternatively, replace "however" with "but". In the next sentence, there should be a semicolon rather than a comma after "contrasted".
Replace "Actors careers" with "Actors' careers". After the link to IMDB, there should be a "." rather than a comma.
Thanks
- Oh my, you'd think none of us ever took much less passed an English grammar class! Kerry, I will start work on your suggested changed, thanks for pointing them out.
PS: don't forget to "sign" your posts to talk pages with the four tildes. --LadyShelley 04:32, 4 June 2007 (BST)
